literature

Masked

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Literature Text

You've been hiding your thoughts;
You've been hiding your actions.
Closed in your own world;
Creating a perfect image.
Your feelings can't be heard,
Your wishes can't come true.
The ambition is gone,
The faith is gone.

Nobody believes what you're saying now.
It's all masked.
It's all been left behind,
In an unmasked time- back then.
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ParadiseLost9's avatar
I like the rhythm you've created, but I do find it slightly lacking at "The faith is gone"... If you added a few more syllables, I think the flow would be better. (Not that you're looking for rhymes, but if you added "too" at the end and changed the two "The's" to "My" it might provide more impact as well. )